Senryu - 18 (Competition) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 18 (Competition)

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Song of life-delights
death is silent and unsung
Yet, both are competing

Tuesday, September 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 15 September 2015

Love to read and hear. A splendid one. Nice Haiku.

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M Asim Nehal 15 September 2015

Thanks much Mr. RH

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Sanjukta Nag 15 September 2015

Wow.. brilliant vision and expression to life and death. loved it.

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Seema Chowdhury 09 November 2015

Another nice and meaningful write of yours.

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T Rajan Evol 10 October 2015

Wisely done, Short and sweet.

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Paul Warren 10 October 2015

I like the way you have set the opposites life and death in competition.

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Sofia Kioroglou 05 October 2015

Your Haiku takes some beating! Thumbs up and thank you for sharing!

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M Asim Nehal 09 October 2015

Thanks much Sofia, I appreciate your comments.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 September 2015

Verily, life and death compete with each other, I invite you to read my poems

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M Asim Nehal 09 October 2015

Thanks much, I enjoyed reading your poems.Thanks,

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