Inching forward to
compete for perfection I
simply realize
The only person
I have to compete with
Is my own self.
There are no losers
Or winners, just explorers
In unison
Creating a bond
Of deep understanding to
overcome friction
There lies in self's
Unity perfect bliss of
Ultimate summit.
The only person I have to compete with Is my own self... the essence of the poem is here. Beautifully presented. A poem with lofty insights. Congratulations for being completion your 400 poems.
Congratulations Savita on your 4th milestone achievement! Yes, winning victory over oneself is the greatest victory.. and our only competitor is our own self! Beautiful set of senryus!
Thank you so much. A comment from you is so valuable. Glad you liked it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, I can't succed if I try to compete with others. I must compete with myself and must try must explore my own potential.