Senryu 22 Series (Ultimate Summit) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 22 Series (Ultimate Summit)

Rating: 5.0


Inching forward to
compete for perfection I
simply realize

The only person
I have to compete with
Is my own self.

There are no losers
Or winners, just explorers
In unison

Creating a bond
Of deep understanding to
overcome friction

There lies in self's
Unity perfect bliss of
Ultimate summit.

Saturday, October 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: competition ,self discovery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As I noticed above I liked the number 400 for this poem. I always have believed in this thought but only this morning it reflected upon me as a poem. it made me realize that I have a long way to go to reach the summit if there is any! But journey has been great. A big thank you to all my readers for their comments and their appreciation, and to PH for giving us a venue to express our thoughts and for fellowship of other poets.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 November 2022

Yes, I can't succed if I try to compete with others. I must compete with myself and must try must explore my own potential.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2017

The only person I have to compete with Is my own self... the essence of the poem is here. Beautifully presented. A poem with lofty insights. Congratulations for being completion your 400 poems.

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Valsa George 09 October 2017

Congratulations Savita on your 4th milestone achievement! Yes, winning victory over oneself is the greatest victory.. and our only competitor is our own self! Beautiful set of senryus!

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Savita Tyagi 09 October 2017

Thanks Valsa for your comment.

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Shakil Ahmed 07 October 2017

nice poem, I have enjoyed reading the poem

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Savita Tyagi 07 October 2017

Thank you so much. A comment from you is so valuable. Glad you liked it.

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