Flew out of my dreams
to real world, heart capsized,
purity vanished.
Dreams gets thumping at the hands of reality, well expressed.Liked it.10.
There is a sad undertone to this senryu; how reality alters the beauty and the purity of dreams...
Reality always devours dreams, still we like to savour dreams inside our eyes. this is life! thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deeply and nicely envisioned. Wonderful dream. Thanks for sharing.