silently moving
thoughts are making icicle
no instinctive verse
Verily, humans need rest but here the poet undergoing icicle stage of thoughts frames a poem instantly, which demonstrates that poetry is what the poet experiences physically, morally, spiritually, socially, emotionally, economically etc and etc. Loved reading and commenting............10
Judging from this Senryu, your icicle is doing great work. Thanks.
A perfect Senryu. The icicle may move slowly and silent, but grows large and strong
Wonderfully thoughts are moving here with wise imagery definitely. Very interesting poem shared...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
thoughts are making icicle - only you can make your thoughts think like this. extraordinary. more & more than 10