Senryu - 45 (Thoughts) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

thoughts are making icicle - only you can make your thoughts think like this. extraordinary. more & more than 10

Verily, humans need rest but here the poet undergoing icicle stage of thoughts frames a poem instantly, which demonstrates that poetry is what the poet experiences physically, morally, spiritually, socially, emotionally, economically etc and etc. Loved reading and commenting............10

Another good haiku from u Oh it is senryu, Lovable.

A very well composed senryu. A perfect 10.

Judging from this Senryu, your icicle is doing great work. Thanks.

A perfect Senryu. The icicle may move slowly and silent, but grows large and strong

Wonderfully thoughts are moving here with wise imagery definitely. Very interesting poem shared...10