Mohammed Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 233,243 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 58 (Compromise) - Poem by Mohammed Asim Nehal

Art of dividing
cake that everyone believes
he got biggest piece.

Topic(s) of this poem: compromise, life

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 58 (Compromise) by Mohammed Asim Nehal

  • (10/25/2015 1:53:00 PM)

    Intelligent writing Asim.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (10/24/2015 5:42:00 PM)

    Yes. If one cuts, another chooses the slice. Equitable. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/24/2015 12:26:00 PM)

    Intelligent way to divide, A compromise done perfectly. God Bless u. (Report)Reply

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  • Shakil Ahmed (10/24/2015 11:19:00 AM)

    life is compromise, it's a real truth, well-composed, thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (10/24/2015 9:43:00 AM)

    Sharing makes things more bigger and a big heart makes biggest sharing. Good one.10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/24/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    Very smart guy!
    Thanks Asim-10
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal(10/24/2015 2:36:00 PM)

    Thanks much Loke Kok.........

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 24, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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