M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 59 (To Stitch Dreams) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The Innocent eye
Examining galaxy
With hopes to stitch dreams

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 59 (To Stitch Dreams) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/25/2015 3:56:00 PM)

    Wonderful examining galaxy speaks about wise imagery shared here....10 (Report) Reply

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  • (10/25/2015 1:24:00 PM)

    Examining galaxy
    With hopes to stitch dreams, Good job.
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  • Valsa George (10/25/2015 7:11:00 AM)

    Stitching dreams is a beautiful expression! Great Senryu, Asim! (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (10/25/2015 6:11:00 AM)

    Young innocent minds do have high dreams hoping to stitch them .Thanksy (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2015 4:30:00 AM)

    and you have stitch a lovely Senryu
    Thanks Asim-10
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  • Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:04:00 AM)

    Your style and technique in this form are marvelous, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/25/2015 12:35:00 AM)

    to stitch dreams - an extraordinary write. brilliant. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 24, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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