M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 61 (Life In Wrong Lane) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Sleeping without dreams
Beauty without brain, Life is
running in wrong lane

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 61 (Life In Wrong Lane) by M. Asim Nehal

  • (10/28/2015 11:44:00 PM)

    Of course life will run in wrong lane, Master of Haiku and Senryu, Asim, God bless u. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/28/2015 12:06:00 PM)

    Dream is much needed in life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/27/2015 11:02:00 AM)

    Life running in wrong lane is painful. Having beauty of love is interesting done. Very well drafted....10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/27/2015 3:06:00 AM)

    Yes, when hopes are shattered, life feels like this. Well written piece on life as usual. (Report) Reply

  • Ari Alsio (10/27/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    Good, I am dumbfounded! (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2015 12:59:00 AM)

    change lane! Change lane!
    Thanks Asim-10
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  • Valsa George (10/27/2015 12:46:00 AM)

    Such a life will be miserable! I know it is fictional! Great Senryu Asim! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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