M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,552 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 68 (True Love) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The balloon of life
will hangs in air as long as
the true love exists.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 68 (True Love) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/6/2015 1:17:00 AM)

    Another truthful senryu on true love. awesome.10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/5/2015 3:42:00 PM)

    Suspended by love. Nicely done, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • Ari Alsio (11/5/2015 12:15:00 PM)

    Well said balloon love, and when it explodes is useless to plead anyone back. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2015 11:47:00 AM)

    with such love life will not cease
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/5/2015 10:20:00 AM)

    True love takes life up. This is definitely very interesting to express truth here. Very neat and wise Senryu shared here with interesting mind....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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