M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,492 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 69 (Curious Eyes) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

curious eyes search
without knowing what it wants,
until true love found

Topic(s) of this poem: love, search

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 69 (Curious Eyes) by M. Asim Nehal

  • (7/30/2016 3:51:00 PM)


    Very true..the search is on.. (Report) Reply

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  • Mihaela Pirjol (11/9/2015 2:32:00 PM)


    So very true...the eyes are searching till the heart tell them to stop. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/6/2015 12:53:00 PM)


    Curious eyes search to find true love is very interesting in this sharing really.,10 (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (11/6/2015 4:59:00 AM)


    after they met love - the threshold remains back. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/6/2015 1:16:00 AM)


    Wow.. you revealed the truth so naturally yet artistically. Great.100++ (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2015 12:54:00 AM)


    with patience true love will always be found
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/6/2015 12:23:00 AM)


    True. Often we don't know what we really want until it presents itself (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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