M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 165,729 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 74 (Above Ego) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

true emotion states
that we keep relationship
above our ego.

Topic(s) of this poem: relationship

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 74 (Above Ego) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Liza Sudina (11/11/2015 4:25:00 AM)


    How many egos do we have? (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/10/2015 10:13:00 AM)


    Yes, ego is always an obstacle towards true love. Remarkable piece.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/10/2015 8:17:00 AM)


    As Loke said below me, only when it is mutual... Thank you Asim a very well crafted Senryu :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2015 1:45:00 AM)


    with lots of give and take
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/10/2015 1:41:00 AM)


    Emotion states about relationship in definite phase of life. Interesting and amazing sharing done really...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/10/2015 12:41:00 AM)


    Yes! ! Ego is the downfall of almost everything (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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