M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 73 (Evasive Dreams) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

realism of life
disturbs with illusions, hence
dreams are evasive.

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 73 (Evasive Dreams) by M. Asim Nehal

  • (1/6/2016 1:04:00 PM)


    realism of life
    disturbs with illusions, hence
    dreams are evasive.
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  • (11/9/2015 3:56:00 AM)


    Outstanding...Life is illusion then dreams are evasive. (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (11/8/2015 10:35:00 PM)


    dreams are evasive. dreams save us. nice! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/8/2015 8:07:00 PM)


    I agree with you fully.... Life is illusive and dreams evasive! Great senryu! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/8/2015 4:30:00 PM)


    An insightful and powerful Senryu. Thank you, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/8/2015 4:25:00 PM)


    Amazingly dream, s are evasive. Coming with illusion still we face reality around us. A thoughtful poem shared with wise mind.10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/8/2015 9:40:00 AM)


    I recollect two lines from Nazish Pratabgarhi,
    Had darja bheanak hay tasveere jahan Nazish,
    Dekhe na agar insan kutch khab to mar jae.
    (Caricature of the world is horrifying-If one doesn't dream, he will die)
    It; s a beautiful poem by Asim......................10
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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/8/2015 8:26:00 AM)


    yes, i do agree with you that dreams are evasive, well-composed poem, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2015 8:19:00 AM)


    I have often wonder why
    your senryu have the answer right
    great senryu my riend-10++
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  • Hazel Durham (11/8/2015 8:12:00 AM)


    Dreams are so evasive and intrusive but reality of life is sprinkled with illusions too!
    Beautiful write!
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  • (11/8/2015 8:12:00 AM)


    Dreams are evasive is a fact. Only a few who could translate their dreams into reality by consistent toil are, thus, exception to the rule and hence, they prove it. Wonderful senryu. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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