realism of life
disturbs with illusions, hence
dreams are evasive.
Dreams are so evasive and intrusive but reality of life is sprinkled with illusions too! Beautiful write!
I have often wonder why your senryu have the answer right great senryu my riend-10++
yes, i do agree with you that dreams are evasive, well-composed poem, thanks for sharing.
I recollect two lines from Nazish Pratabgarhi, Had darja bheanak hay tasveere jahan Nazish, Dekhe na agar insan kutch khab to mar jae. (Caricature of the world is horrifying-If one doesn't dream, he will die) It; s a beautiful poem by Asim......................10
realism of life disturbs with illusions, hence dreams are evasive.
I agree with you fully.... Life is illusive and dreams evasive! Great senryu!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dreams are evasive is a fact. Only a few who could translate their dreams into reality by consistent toil are, thus, exception to the rule and hence, they prove it. Wonderful senryu. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.