Senryu - 73 (Evasive Dreams) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 73 (Evasive Dreams)

Rating: 5.0


realism of life
disturbs with illusions, hence
dreams are evasive.

Sunday, November 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 08 November 2015

Dreams are evasive is a fact. Only a few who could translate their dreams into reality by consistent toil are, thus, exception to the rule and hence, they prove it. Wonderful senryu. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Hazel Durham 08 November 2015

Dreams are so evasive and intrusive but reality of life is sprinkled with illusions too! Beautiful write!

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Loke Kok Yee 08 November 2015

I have often wonder why your senryu have the answer right great senryu my riend-10++

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Shakil Ahmed 08 November 2015

yes, i do agree with you that dreams are evasive, well-composed poem, thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2015

I recollect two lines from Nazish Pratabgarhi, Had darja bheanak hay tasveere jahan Nazish, Dekhe na agar insan kutch khab to mar jae. (Caricature of the world is horrifying-If one doesn't dream, he will die) It; s a beautiful poem by Asim......................10

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2016

realism of life disturbs with illusions, hence dreams are evasive.

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T Rajan Evol 09 November 2015

Outstanding...Life is illusion then dreams are evasive.

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Liza Sudina 08 November 2015

dreams are evasive. dreams save us. nice!

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Valsa George 08 November 2015

I agree with you fully.... Life is illusive and dreams evasive! Great senryu!

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Kelly Kurt 08 November 2015

An insightful and powerful Senryu. Thank you, Mohammed

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