M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 91 Wait - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Spider spinning web
my thoughts are elevated
We both wait for fly.

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 91 Wait by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/10/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    In contract meaning but applicable to both in their own ways, Man (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/10/2015 3:14:00 AM)

    Thoughts are elevated to fly in this interesting senryu and this is definitely very thoughtful poem shared here.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (12/9/2015 10:12:00 AM)

    Nicely conceived and written senryu (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (12/9/2015 10:04:00 AM)

    Spider and the poet both have been spinning their own webs and have got a common pursuit- fly which can have an extension of flight for the latter. This is an amazing articulation. Thanks, Md.Asim ji. (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2015 10:03:00 AM)

    Short but sweet and meaningful senryu. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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