life's boat will sail
to island of relations
through the sea of love
...........through the sea of love....life boat....a meaningful Senryu is well executed. five stars.
Excellent poem. One has to reach out to others to nurture new relationships or to renew the existing bonds. Love and care are the basic tools to get the desired results. Thanks, Asim ji. This is such a marvelous poem.
You are very right. Sea of love is the best see to behold all rivers. Life's boat is well sailed in such rivers to sea. A nice poem is interestingly penned.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If the island of relationships is based on true love, the people will enjoy the pleasure of intimate and sincere relationships. Love is the basis of human movement, and unlike hatred, well penned senryu. Excellent