no sun to sparkle
on a dull, windy morning
my heart is at home
A beautiful senryu..... well one- dear poet. /// Kisses on eyelid / As to wake me up from sleep/ By the morning breeze! //////
A fantastic senryu dear Dr Nehal. I can feel the effect of the sparkling sun on what you call a dull windy morning. Appreciated the magnificent contemplation. Top score and to my favorite!
5 Stars full Score........we have winter again now minus 5 Celcius degree, after days of starting Spring
Sad sounding Senryu, Sweet sharing Sir, but you have a great heart for all things it is now at home, makes the sad sounding Senryu seated with such greatness in your heart that is safe and sound at home.
Best place to be, on a cool windy day snuggled up cozily! .. Heart at home! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
There's a similar weather to Canada Bravo!
At home, is ever safe, cozy and comfortable dear Asim ji.......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
12/6/2022 11:48:19 PM # 18.104.22.1689