Senryu ~ At Home Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ At Home

Rating: 5.0

no sun to sparkle
on a dull, windy morning
my heart is at home

Tuesday, March 29, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
Pallab Chaudhury 29 March 2022

A beautiful senryu..... well one- dear poet. /// Kisses on eyelid / As to wake me up from sleep/ By the morning breeze! //////

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 March 2022

A fantastic senryu dear Dr Nehal. I can feel the effect of the sparkling sun on what you call a dull windy morning. Appreciated the magnificent contemplation. Top score and to my favorite!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 April 2022

5 Stars full Score........we have winter again now minus 5 Celcius degree, after days of starting Spring

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 April 2022

Sad sounding Senryu, Sweet sharing Sir, but you have a great heart for all things it is now at home, makes the sad sounding Senryu seated with such greatness in your heart that is safe and sound at home.

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Rebecca Navarre 02 April 2022

Best place to be, on a cool windy day snuggled up cozily! .. Heart at home! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 March 2022

There's a similar weather to Canada Bravo!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 March 2022

At home, is ever safe, cozy and comfortable dear Asim ji.......10

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