Senryu - Clouds Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Clouds

Rating: 5.0


a book of poems
i see two lovers in sky
formed by moving clouds

Senryu - Clouds
Tuesday, October 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 20 October 2020

Images! ! ! ! Love in the air! Night with the romance of nature! Two lovers, Mystery of the night clouds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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S H 20 October 2020

A wonderful imaginary you have created by this scenario the moving clouds make many structure in the sky but the way you have correlated the structure with the book of love a book of poem is something very different and unique I have a fabulous five stars to you.

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Shreya Hacks 20 October 2020

wow what a Haiku and what a picture. it makes me think how beautiful is the story of life and love is written on the cloud

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Suzon Albert 21 October 2020

Wow, clouds writing the book of poem And the imagery is seen on the clouds that makes the move what are wonderful poem you have written, thanks forsharing. nothing less than 5 stars

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 October 2020

A well penned senryu poem. Truly magnificent...5 stars*****

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2020

Clouds form the amazing scene in sky. You are a nice observer. Anther low-pressure is in move. Weather forecast indicates that there will be heavy rain for next 3 days in South-Coastline of Odisha, and Andhra Pradesh and Telengana. Clouds will play in sky and write new book. Your poem is timely form of moving clouds...5 stars.

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Darren Jkoeryo 20 October 2020

Oh a complete Poems written on sky by clouds is really amusing.5*

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Ricky Manhatten 20 October 2020

Poems written on sky by clouds is really amusing.5*

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