Senryu - Life Boat Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Life Boat

Rating: 5.0


a drifting life boat
merily floats in river
In storm, calm weather

Sunday, September 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: river,weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 06 September 2020

This is how life sums up for all of us. It keeps drifting on the waters of time. Nice Senryu.10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2020

In between calm and stormy weather boa of life floats gently move ahead with amazing beauty and realization. An amazing poem is excellently penned...10

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Deepak S S 10 September 2020

Yes moving on is the mul mantra of life.

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Kostas Lagos 07 September 2020

No matter the circumstances, life goes on...excellent

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 September 2020

On this earth the life boat- the unstable mind rowing on the confusion flowing!

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Varsha M 06 September 2020

Progression matters most Rest all takes care of itself.... beautiful sir.

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Anjandev Roy 06 September 2020

In storm, calm weather...........significant......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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