Valsa George

Senryu- New Life - Poem by Valsa George

Pod of a seed breaks
Cells divide in mother's womb
Dreams bud, new life blooms

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Senryu- New Life by Valsa George

  • (1/19/2018 6:35:00 AM)

    Very nicely done, no one can do it better. Thanks Valsa (Report) Reply

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  • Kostas Lagos (10/31/2017 12:39:00 PM)

    Where there is new life, there is hope (Report) Reply

    Kostas Lagos (10/31/2017 12:41:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem

  • (10/17/2017 2:36:00 PM)

    To have life.....the dreams, the anticipation, the destiny........very exciting. (Report) Reply

  • Nivy Sochi (10/17/2017 2:16:00 PM)

    Aha! Like a spartan's speech, terse, but then open to interpretations. This is simplicity, of words, meaning and one's standpoint. You're well rooted in this art, dear poetess. Nothing to be added to or removed from the above construction.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (10/15/2017 7:50:00 PM)

    The story how the new life blooms, a thought provoking poem, who is instrumental in it, there must be a divine soul that manages all this. (Report) Reply

  • Binayakumar Mohanty (10/15/2017 4:33:00 AM)

    Every new life has a sad story behind. Nice composition mam. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (10/10/2017 1:07:00 AM)

    Birth is a miracle. You capture it so beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2017 5:55:00 PM)

    Wow! And Wow! ! ! And additionally, WOW! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/9/2017 7:43:00 AM)

    Steps of creation captured fully in just three lines! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/6/2017 8:40:00 AM)

    After breaking of pod a seed dreams about bud and bloom in new life. This has been astutely and amusingly you have painted here dear madam. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 4, 2017

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