Senryu- New Life Poem by Valsa George

Senryu- New Life

Rating: 5.0


Pod of a seed breaks
Cells divide in mother's womb
Dreams bud, new life blooms

Wednesday, October 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

After breaking of pod a seed dreams about bud and bloom in new life. This has been astutely and amusingly you have painted here dear madam. :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 October 2017

Steps of creation captured fully in just three lines!

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Richard Wlodarski 09 October 2017

Wow! And Wow! ! ! And additionally, WOW! ! ! !

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Nosheen Irfan 10 October 2017

Birth is a miracle. You capture it so beautifully.

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Soran M. H 25 August 2020

the professional poet here playing on three different lines, and all of them would lead us to optimistic and positive states of mind, that is why I interest in her deep and poignant works, I would say brilliant oh our dear poet Valsa and have a big 10+ from the honest heart

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Soran M. H 21 August 2020

the conclusion Dreams bud, new life blooms Excellent

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Soran M. H 21 August 2020

The seed - - -> Plant........bloom Cells - - - -> human........birth Dreams - - - - > meta physics world.......utopia

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Loke Kok Yee 19 January 2018

Very nicely done, no one can do it better. Thanks Valsa

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Kostas Lagos 31 October 2017

Where there is new life, there is hope

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Kostas Lagos 31 October 2017

Beautiful poem

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