Senryu - Soul Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Soul

Rating: 5.0


skin, flower and wind
carries the known scent to~
unknown destination

Tuesday, June 21, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

"The known scent" metaphor for soul is explained by the physical attributes of skin, flower and wind.. and how "soul" heads for "unknown destination" is the most fit attribute to soul. The entire idea is expressed in easy-flowing words, with great brevity, makes the poem exquisite. Top score

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M. Asim Nehal 23 June 2022

I appreciate your insightful comment, your interpretation is exact what I meant by skin, flower and wind...

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 June 2022

How lovely! This is in my Favorites.

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Nabakishore Dash 22 June 2022

Known scent to unknown destination! !

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Bharati Nayak 22 June 2022

Wow--So beautiful!

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Rebecca Navarre 23 June 2022

Ever such beautiful feeling to this! ..............

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Rebecca Navarre 23 June 2022

Powerfully and beautifully expressed of heart and soul! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 June 2022

A poem of great depth so succincty and brilliantly expressed.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 June 2022

Without question, a true masterpiece! In such succint form, you've brilliantly described the soul's journey to its eternal destination!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 June 2022

I argee with everyone Bravo! Bravo!

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