skin, flower and wind
carries the known scent to~
unknown destination
Powerfully and beautifully expressed of heart and soul! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++
A poem of great depth so succincty and brilliantly expressed.
Without question, a true masterpiece! In such succint form, you've brilliantly described the soul's journey to its eternal destination!
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"The known scent" metaphor for soul is explained by the physical attributes of skin, flower and wind.. and how "soul" heads for "unknown destination" is the most fit attribute to soul. The entire idea is expressed in easy-flowing words, with great brevity, makes the poem exquisite. Top score
I appreciate your insightful comment, your interpretation is exact what I meant by skin, flower and wind...