Senryu ~ Trails Poem by Dr. M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ Trails

Rating: 5.0


an evening lamp post
standing like a wounded heart
leaving behind trails

Wednesday, January 12, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: human life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 January 2022

A poignant and touching, Senryu. Well crafted with great imagery.

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Robert Murray Smith 12 January 2022

Light looks at darkness.

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Poetic Sky 13 January 2022

You ignited a fire in my soul through this wonderful Senryu. Thanks a lot.

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Poetic Sky 13 January 2022

Between the birth and the death human travels miles and returns to the same spot again and that is what a lamp post means to me,

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Shreya Hacks 13 January 2022

A tale of broken heart through the lamp post is fantastic. Full stars

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Mamta S 13 January 2022

Short and meaningful. Small pack with great story.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 January 2022

brilliance Bravo!

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