Serial Killer Documentary Poem by Bilal Raja

Serial Killer Documentary

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Look at him such a nice man, a son, a husband, a friend, a father
So smart, he worked harder then any other, lawyer or doctor
Locked her up and chopped her, who would have thought
That he was a killer, who killed her? Tortured her in his chamber
A danger, a friend who’s suddenly become a stranger.

Can’t describe the urge, the surge, merged with murders occurred
There’s no word to describe the vibe; I’m disturbed; it’s absurd
Mindset’s all blurred; I’m distant, bird’s eye view of the world
This is only the blurb; you haven’t even heard the full gory story
Of how a young boy from the suburbs, happen to find his glory

I’m feeling weak, a week since I’ve been asleep, my future’s bleak
A creep who roams the streets for something to eat: child’s meat
A treat, a beast who feasts on at least a piece of the deceased
Pleased to be unleashed off his leash and released all of his disease
Ceasing the peace, strangle her to death, and leave her to bleed.

The thrill to kill, with the will to thrill, no dreams to fulfill
Drink and pop pills, ‘til my stomachs filled. And if you feel I’m real,
I’ll take you home, cut you up, and eat your flesh to seal the deal
I’m only joking honey, don’t be scared by the knife I wield,
It’s the f****** chainsaw I’m going to use to make you squeal.

My favorite hobby is having sex with dead bodies, with every victim
I need more pain to be inflicted, sick sin, so I ripped in to her chest
Slipped in my fist, pulled her heart out, and ticked her off the list
Slit throat and wrists, give her a little kiss, she wont be missed
So what if it was my mother? B**** shouldn’t have got me p*****!

It’s not a bloodbath; it’s a bath of blood, look at the caskets flood
Cuddle your love; give them a hug before they’re covered in mud
Immediate media attention, police got special case on the task
It’s funny, while I stalk this city, wearing your face as a mask
Who made me this crazy? I can’t say. I’m making them hate me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

A nice poetic narration seems like a short story with fine rhymes and alliteration and assonance of words...Scary and that makes it qualify as dark poetry but more fitting to be a short story....Great read i had...thx! ! !

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I want my Mummy too, but she is dead. We had a slasher in our country years ago, and his wife worked with my Mother. At night he would lock all the doors for her saying, I don't want the slasher to get you! Mental sickness is rife, and I also think violence in the media accounts for much of the violence in society today. Your words were about horror and it worked well. Well done. 10 Karin Anderson

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i'm scared. I want my mommy......................

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Jason Palmer 10 July 2009

more literature than poem... but that pays... have you tried to write short stories and get them published?

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James Mclain 10 July 2009

So when you.. have cut.. the last treat.. from the tree.. of innocence.. Does this.. beast.. go after.. roots of the tree...iip Do you have walmarts over there..? ... :)

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Assorted Thoughts 19 July 2009

Dang, you should share this with Rob Zombie. Nicely done.

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Dylan Oppedahl 15 July 2009

It's stupid they made you censor it. It was alot more raw and angry with the cuss words

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linzi- kidd 12 July 2009

people talk about this becoming a short story. but no. i see it becoming a play. which plays turn into movies as well. for instance, sweeney todd. a great tale of a 'butcher'... this is a great poem. a bit scary and intimidating..but very interesting.

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Patrick A. Martin 11 July 2009

Sorry bilal I would rather write poety on poemhunter than watch CSI maybe you could write cripts for a bbc tv crime show wot ever not for mine. Patrick

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Dylan Dutrow 11 July 2009

Very scary but great work. It would make a great short story.

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