The Only Way To Cross The River Of Fire Is By Drowning Poem by Bilal Raja

The Only Way To Cross The River Of Fire Is By Drowning

Rating: 3.8


Your heart has fallen for a love
It’s going to have to forget
Come into the midst of love
And look from where you first met

Even if you were blessed with beauty
Your insecurities are too great
They will hunt you down and make you fail
To find your eternal mate

This intoxication is your beauty’s fault
Your love is my entire life
You already knew it was over
So why go through the strife?

She’s moved on and is perfectly happy
And now you must do the same
So my smile continues to deceive the world
But that doesn’t heal the pain…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

the las ttow lones gave you the score

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Emily Sleator *His Babey* 17 January 2009

happiness can cover up alot of things but it cant cover up the things u feel.... when i cry my eyeliner shows how i feel

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Dylan Oppedahl 12 July 2009

Yea very true. You can smile but it will never heal

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Deona Skidmore 18 January 2009

By FAR deserving of the ten I'm rating it...it fits my life perfectly.

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Dolan Doran 18 January 2009

thank god, someone else understand the way it feels when you loose a love like that...it's a great poem. My favorite of yours so far.

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Jessica Goudreault 17 January 2009

Those are some real feelings and I know a lot of people would be able to relate. I really like your rhyming, it's not just typical 'You, do, who' kinda stuff. It's more thought out, it's what I try to do and I like it.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 January 2009

Brave through the fire if you have to, she'll be impressed and regreted when your dead.Good writes Bilal.

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