Shaam K Baad! (Urdu) Poem by Shahzia Batool

why not in english about what happens after the evening?

Shaam k baad ki fiza rangin hoti hai, har koi talashta ek nai suraj har shaam k baad. itni herran n ho batool shaam k baad, ek nai subah aayegi har shaam k baad. xlent

i don't know chaste urdu but still i can understand the essence of the poetry, the poem is in beautiful form and it got beautiful flow.....i like the poem.

(seh peher tk to zamaanay say mila kartay hen khud say hoti hay mulaaqat sada shaam k baad) bahut pasand aaya. Jaan e ghazal shair hai. But......

dil sar-e-shaam hi iss tarha sulag uthhta he jis tarha taaq pe jalti he shama shaam k baad wah wah...awesom poem

yeh to naadan say bachhay ki tarha rota hay mangta rehta he subho ki faza shaam k baad seh peher tk to zamaanay say mila kartay hen khud say hoti hay mulaaqat sada shaam k baad This is the best piece I have ever read in Urdu. All the verses have a complete thought in them. You are an amazing writer. You have reached heights. I really appreciate the the fascination you have in your words. Amazing write.

awsome......poem really touched my heart....nice creation

mujhko charhtay huay suraj ki tarha kafi hay --i specially love this line.Straightaway scolding of the sun and saying-Hey Sun or Aftab suno-your heat is not enough for me.The alliteration Shaam ke baad creates really a whirlwind.Lagta hain sham ke baad hi ishq ki shama jalegi. Sohne Sajjana Da Mehnga Bhaa Lagge Je Deve Dhokha Yaar Ohi Ek Pal Jeen Lyi Na Sah Labhe Has-Has Ke Jindgi Jeen Vala Ro-Ro Ke Maut Da Rah Labhe Thought well and scripted well.....i can only say after this sleep well..