A Poem... By Ramesh Rai! Poem by Shahzia Batool

It is said that poetry can't be translated but the way you have maintained the beauty of this poem and the way you have conveyed the feelings and the true essence of this poem is just praiseworthy! ! ! I just loved the start... Life cannot be scribed into words Or else I would shift the whole of it By my pen on the paper Then I would sign it, and say Take it This is my life! and then Life is to live Life is to die Someone lives after death Someone dies while living Sensational lines, steeped in wisdom! ! ! it's so philosophical! ! ! loved it. :)

A wonderful poem Shahzia. Thank you for the translation.

Excellent! A perfect translation of life! A reconciled Mind and Heart and fortify by wisdom! What a striking poem fully embedded with a clear vision of nature! Nothing is further from the truth my dear brother and fellow poet friend! I cannot possibly finish this comment without wholeheartedly thanking our fellow poet friend Shahzia Batool for her beautiful translation of this thought provoking write! 10+++ God Bless Both of You for your great talents! Your brother and friend from New York City, Romeo

'Life is a feeling which breathes every moment And aches with desire to live! '...I loved these lines and kudos to both poets for such full of life lines.

Deep philosophical poem, well-done shahzia!

An awesome poem with great thoughts and it is a success.

beautiful poem and thoughts.

a wonderful translation... Someone lives after death Someone dies while living Die only those For whom life is a burden brilliant work, ,

dis is really a great work; Life is a feeling which breathes every moment And aches with desire to live! ...abt life dis is my exact feeling too

Its a good write. Loved it! ! !