Shack Is Built In Forest Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Shack Is Built In Forest

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Like a cabin with branches and straws,
Shack is built by stranger moon in forest,
During full growth day moon will fall,
Silver appearance in shack will shine.

Image will dance in nearby pond in dream,
Beauty of reflection in calmness will sing,
This is perfect place to meditate for moon,
In top secret wisdom will be practised.

Giving inspiration to trees in far forest,
Moon will definitely dance in wild stream,
Singing song of love for God trees will tell,
Hearing new fable next day moon will go.

Shack is built for reading and writing,
In deep forest sages give teaching to all,
Moon is learning in this hut to worship,
Sage moon is shining in stillness in glory.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 July,2017. All rights reserved.

Thursday, August 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,forest,moon,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 13 August 2017

Beauty of reflection in calmness will sing, thank you for sharing the poem with us

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Gautam Chopra 11 November 2020

Shack is built for reading and writing and such shack is really wonderful. I loved this poem.

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Valsa George 08 September 2020

Moon presented as a sage staying in a forest shack to reflect on life and God and also to read and write is indeed a sublime poetic fancy! A lovely poem, Kumaramani sir!

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Pushpendra Patel 04 March 2019

During full growth day moon will fall. God gives us wisdom and we feel his mercy. Swinging in his wisdom is our fortune. We love God very much. With love and hope we are growing with him. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 November 2018

A wonderful imaginative write on nature. Beautifully crafted write. Liked the third stanza.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 January 2018

My favorite lines: Image will dance in nearby pond in dream/Beauty of reflection in calmness will sing/ This is perfect place to meditate for moon/ In top secret wisdom will be practiced…This poem provides peace of mind and enriches our wisdom…Thanks dear sir for sharing!

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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