Shining Effect Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Shining Effect

Rating: 5.0


I have my inner conscience
This shines with wisdom
While you share your love
I feel this in my mind.

I participate in your work
To build heaven you plan
I am tiny soul with light
Righteousness I follow ever.

So far and so near you are
In love we are connected
Your dignity is of mine too
As a child I inherit from you.

Your affection has taught me
To sing songs of love only
Everyday I repeat and polish
Wisdom gives a shining effect.

Sunday, July 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 24 July 2016

I like to think that my father passed that on to me

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Your affection has taught me To sing songs of love only Everyday I repeat and polish Wisdom gives a shining effect. Kumarmani ji, a lovely, lovely poem. This is how i feel too. So good! A full score 10+++

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 03 August 2016

Your dignity is of mine too As a child I inherit from you Superb, speaks volumes, what we brought to take back nothing, we just learn what he teaches, live as per his wish, disappear when he calls, until sing his praise mesmerising for a parched soul like mine, keep sharing more and more dear sir thanks

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Akhtar Jawad 30 July 2016

If anyone else would have written this poem I would have kissed his pen but for Mahakul it's a routine. He has written hundreds of such thoughtful poems. A great poem by a great poet!

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M Asim Nehal 29 July 2016

Outstanding poem, Brilliant lines and wonderful flow.Thanks for sharing, I quote: : : 10++++ Everyday I repeat and polish Wisdom gives a shining effect.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 July 2016

In love we are connected! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2016

Your poem has a shining effect on the soul. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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