Melvina Germain

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Shades Of Gray - Poem by Melvina Germain

Starlit colors
were that of bright blues,
with flickers of crystallite silver hues.
As time progressed,
life’s radiance faded.
Shades of gray, danced over the
brilliance of the universal aura, creating
a systemic embolism, penetrating deep
within it’s core.
Lush greens, fertile lands,
lost forever more.


(April 25/2007)


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  • (5/2/2007 8:37:00 PM)

    Fabulous impression is what I feel in this poem.
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  • (4/28/2007 11:16:00 PM)

    i give you a ten on this one. it is a very fine piece of poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/27/2007 12:54:00 PM)

    An artist painting a canvas with words.Marvellous work Melvina.
    Sid John.
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  • (4/27/2007 3:11:00 AM)

    Many colors of the spectrum are you, painting a picture so beautiful... Melvina.. Paint on my poetic friend, i will keep on reading tell the end... Andy x (Report)Reply

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  • (4/26/2007 11:39:00 AM)

    Such a BEAUTIFUL SIGHT you created so amazingly! I can see your words and I love your imagery in this one.Melvina, you write sooooo well and I am always glad when you put your fingers to typing...because it always brings great results! ((Smile)) Please keep up the excellent work.
    L,
    =Shelley=
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  • (4/26/2007 2:51:00 AM)

    smiles and a peaceful yet poignant reflection from my end from a very wonderful poem...your words do have small hands that can touch the recess of my emotions. thanks my friend. xoxoxo (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/26/2007 12:10:00 AM)

    Superior imagework employed here, Melvina...a spectrum of vividity & grande depiction...and perhaps a lilt of sadness for the grey that that somehow cannot see the kaleidoscopic view in front of it...Solid work, young lady...

    FjR
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  • (4/25/2007 11:36:00 PM)

    A lament for a landscape that is slowing passing away before the poet's eyes. A wonderful command of colors displayed in this nostalgic piece. Beautiful, Melvina.

    Love,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 17, 2011


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