Shadow Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Shadow

Rating: 4.9


The sun shone through the leaves,
Casting shadows on the lawn
Following my love's death
I became quiet and withdrawn

A wonderful breeze whispered
The darkest hour is just before the dawn
When you miss your life's reason
Be patient and serene as swan

(2008/6/17)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

so wonderfully sad....

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Catherine Rica Cosico 18 June 2008

Lovely as it is....well done! ! ! Cate

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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2008

Beautifully expressed Persian my friend......heart felt and tenderly penned best wishes Jon

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Andre Lopez 17 June 2008

good poem love i love it

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Jeannie Ann Clark 17 June 2008

'...casting shadows on the lawn....I became...withdrawn...'; the feeling of mourning is clearly express. Good writing, thank you. With respect, Jeannie.

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Subbaraman N V 29 November 2008

Absolutely poignant! Thanks for sharing!

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Natasha Stubbs-Ennis 16 October 2008

This poem brings out the loss of life, a very good poem and a very good description of the emotion

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Hamed Pooyan 13 October 2008

excellent! when you born in shiraz you could say as this poem! pelase tell more poem...

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Tsira Goge 07 October 2008

Beauty of grief... 10... Tsira

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 06 October 2008

Such a lovely poem... Oh heart so pained, spring and love will come again! Dorothy

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