The sun shone through the leaves,
Casting shadows on the lawn
Following my love's death
I became quiet and withdrawn
A wonderful breeze whispered
The darkest hour is just before the dawn
When you miss your life's reason
Be patient and serene as swan
(2008/6/17)
Beautifully expressed Persian my friend......heart felt and tenderly penned best wishes Jon
'...casting shadows on the lawn....I became...withdrawn...'; the feeling of mourning is clearly express. Good writing, thank you. With respect, Jeannie.
This poem brings out the loss of life, a very good poem and a very good description of the emotion
excellent! when you born in shiraz you could say as this poem! pelase tell more poem...
Such a lovely poem... Oh heart so pained, spring and love will come again! Dorothy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so wonderfully sad....