Shadow Me Poem by Neela Nath Das

Shadow Me

Rating: 3.9


Shadow me oh my
Dark emotion.
Shadow me all the way!

Shadow me to rock
In cradle heart,
To sway and just to sway!

Shadow me as a
Shady love tree,
In my hot, scorching day!

Shadow me must in,
Middle of night,
Like a gleaming pure ray!

Shadow me, shadow,
My foggy love,
Shadow wild me to tame.

Shadow to follow
My every step,
Shadow me in each poem!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Tight, crisp linage makes for aneye-pleasing read...Well Done, indeed! ~FjR~

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Shouvik Roy 04 July 2012

shadow me till the end of time... :) i love it, this is really crisp and sharp...kudos.. :)

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Kamal N. Baruah 04 July 2012

Wow.. Fabulous :) Shadow me now In Ur feelings And bestow me now D power to feel D feelings of ds shadowik heart :)

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Unwritten Soul 04 July 2012

Living in the shadow, stay in dream...but in this dream, i stand on my shadow...shadow of me, shadows me in line, in poetry, your words shadow me hahahhaha, nice poem with a good flow Nila, keep good happy n mystery in one poetry LOL_Unwritten Soul

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Babatunde Aremu 11 July 2012

You are good in the use of imagery in a simple and easily grasp tences. I like your poems. I also need a shadow in all I do. Great mind.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 July 2012

touching ink.different type but makes nice reading.

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Monoj Panday 04 July 2012

one beutiful poem, shadow me

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Kasia Fedyk 04 July 2012

Oh how beautiful Nilakishi, it is so tender and subtle I can feel its cradle in this amazing poem. Thank you!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 July 2012

let brims of love lay back reeling in cocoon as art of love lies in concealing love, elation of heart sighs of relief beneath shadow,10+++, thanks for sharing

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