Shangrila Poem by Akhtar Jawad


Rating: 4.9

Shape like a heart in love of someone,
Having a name like the heroine of a love story,
All round I see the resorts for love,
Nude of the nature with a hidden glory.

Gorgeous beauty of a fairy I see.

Rare are the charms of your curved auricles,
I arose from the shores of the Arabian Sea
Like clouds I shall rain at your ventricles,
A pearl for you, no excuses, just accept my plea.

Wednesday, July 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lake
Lower Kachura Lake, also known as Shangrila Lake is located in Kachura village 20 minutes from Skardu city town. The lake is also known as Shangrila lake.
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2018

The inscription of Shangrila lake is so amusing. Remaining at home I am enjoying the Shangrila lake through your poem with its attractive photograph provided. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.

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Kelly Kurt 04 July 2018

I was analyzing all the way through reading and tried to pinpoint the metaphorical meaning. I then saw the photo and reread the poem. Beautiful!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 July 2018

Your poetic imagination and natural feelings are of high standard. Gorgeous beauty of a fairy of nature which is heart shaped lake is the beautiful queen of love in your imagery. A pearl of heart you have found from the shores of the Arabian Sea and the hidden glory is sung of love. Shangrila name is very sweet and yes she is heroine of your poem. At each moment she sends message of love. She understands value of love.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 July 2018

All should restore love in life. Love has power of transformation. This poem is a poetic gem. I congratulate you and send my greatest gratitude and best wishes for your achievement. A perfect poem is chosen as the poem of the day and you are a nice member to present this precious gift to all. ***Rating 10 for this**

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Robert Murray Smith 05 July 2018

Excellent write. Very poetically framed. Congratulations on your poem in this category. ++10

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Rajnish Manga 06 July 2018

A lovely place with a charming heart-shaped lake truly deserves a romantic bond or affinity for a lifetime. Great landscape of nature. Thanks for sharing the poem, Akhtar Jawad sahab.

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It reads even better the second time. You have put your heart in to this heart shaped lake in such a wonderful way that it almost seems as you are in love with the lake. Well done my friend!

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Lovely lines that are loaded with love for nature in general and the lake in particular. Jawad you have brought this lake to life in such a simple but splendid way. Excellent expressed my friend. Congrats for your poem being chosen as the poem of the day. Well deserved.10+++

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Fascinating poem and wonderful picture.. a ten..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 July 2018

A lovely nature write. It beautifully and vividly depicted a one of a kind lake. Another marvelous poem from a great poet. Congratulations!

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