Share Thy Feelings Poem by Lyn Paul

Share Thy Feelings

Rating: 4.9


Sing that song
That heals thy heart
When you have lost everything
Yet there is always a new start

Giving up is the easy route
Take the navigators road
Share your pain
Bare your load

If you can get up from falling
You know you are there
If you are so low
You need to tell an ear that will care

The course of our lives
Can be incredibly unfair

Go with it
Be with it
Fight it
If you can

You've been through too much
But you will do it
Again
And again

Let each ache
Bring you closer to living
Do not give up
Find your gift of giving

Share thy feelings
Let others see Your will to live
Are we ever able to forgive?


You have done your all
So smile



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Lyn Paul

Monday, May 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiving,giving,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 14 May 2016

The blessing thing in you is the soft and caring heart...and the poem speaks for you telling how good you are :)

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Tony Karas 03 May 2016

A magical write my friend. Hope is a phoenix... it always rises from the ashes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 May 2016

Sing the songs of peace and love and, share your pains in life! Hoping for a better tomorrow. Nice piece of work.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2016

With the Hope of living! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2017

Let each ache Bring you closer to living Do not give up Find your gift of giving... you really gave me hope.. after a heart attack i was losing hope. it is then i read ur poem.. thank u. God comes through the poetess... tony

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

Lyn, This is a five-star poem for sure! ! Sometimes medications, such as anitdepressants, may help someone in need. You've done a FINE JOB, Lyn. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'If you are so low You need to tell an ear that will care' MORE GOOD ADVICE. Hopefully such ears are available when needed, and they may be on telephone 'Help Line'. : ) I think such 'lines'are toll free. : )

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) Ok, 'bare' as a verb here means: 'to make or lay (something) bare (see BARE entry 1) : UNCOVER' ....ok! : )

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'Share your pain Bare your load' IS GOOD advice! ! But I 'had to' check the meaning of 'bare' to be sure that I understood. (cont.)

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Jennifer Birchall 10 March 2019

This is a poem I needed to read right now, thank you for this wonderful poem Lyn.

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