She was like a rainbow
A delight after a storm
Shimmering so elegantly
And vibrant against the backdrop of sky
Everyone gazing towards her magnificence
Delightful and dazzling like a summer bloom
But alas, gone too soon
For the arc of the rainbow
It slowly fades into the blue
Leaving us saddened, numb in the gloom.
She was like a rainbow
She shone so wonderfully, then
Faded and left us all behind.
Olivia, she will never be forgot.
wonderfully written elegy.. and nice comparison with beautiful imagery.
i like the alliteration: 'delightful/dazzling', and the repetition of 'she was like a rainbow'. mrs pez? nicely told. bri :)
Very sweet and lovely poem with a sad melody, I like this mourning poem for a sweet girl, Olivia.
i enjoyed this once again. favorite lines: She was like a rainbow She shone so wonderfully, then Faded and left us all behind............................. : ( let me share this memory with others by adding it to Section A of December's showcase. Thanks. and to MyPoemList if it isn't already there. bri ;) happy holidays? p.s. today i have read the poem and my earlier comment and your response to my comment. i wonder if you know that i would not have seen your response, Mrs. Pez, if i had not returned to this page. i don't seem to get notices of such responses otherwise.
Such a thoughtful and touching tribute!
very Loving very pretty Memorial poem. i like this one very much
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
............a beautiful poem in memory ★