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She Was Like A Rainbow - Rainbow Girl

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She was like a rainbow
A delight after a storm
Shimmering so elegantly
And vibrant against the backdrop of sky
Everyone gazing towards her magnificence
Delightful and dazzling like a summer bloom
But alas, gone too soon
For the arc of the rainbow
It slowly fades into the blue
Leaving us saddened, numb in the gloom.

She was like a rainbow
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Thursday, September 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For Olivia,12 years old. You will always be remembered babe x Mrs Pez xx
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 December 2016

i enjoyed this once again. favorite lines: She was like a rainbow She shone so wonderfully, then Faded and left us all behind............................. : ( let me share this memory with others by adding it to Section A of December's showcase. Thanks. and to MyPoemList if it isn't already there. bri ;) happy holidays? p.s. today i have read the poem and my earlier comment and your response to my comment. i wonder if you know that i would not have seen your response, Mrs. Pez, if i had not returned to this page. i don't seem to get notices of such responses otherwise.

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Onuora Ilodibe 12 June 2016

A rainbow came and gone.......

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 May 2016

Like a summer bloom! ! Nice piece of work.

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Such a thoughtful and touching tribute!

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Stephani Kievaughan 23 September 2015

very Loving very pretty Memorial poem. i like this one very much

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Rahman Henry 19 September 2015

Very sweet and lovely poem with a sad melody, I like this mourning poem for a sweet girl, Olivia.

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2015

i like the alliteration: 'delightful/dazzling', and the repetition of 'she was like a rainbow'. mrs pez? nicely told. bri :)

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Sanjukta Nag 14 September 2015

wonderfully written elegy.. and nice comparison with beautiful imagery.

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Kyvin Nash 03 September 2015

Lovely elegy to Olivia...nice poem, well written!

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* Sunprincess * 03 September 2015

............a beautiful poem in memory ?

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