She Was The Girl.. Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

She Was The Girl..

Rating: 5.0
 


She was the girl
the universe liked!
never cared for dress
like a charmy new born
the modern fashion
on her.....
she was the girl
the universe liked!
Amusing and amazing little wear
and universe fear
blood boiling youth
and the toothless shiver
she was the girl
the universe liked! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 11 August 2009

nice lago a universal girl i like that

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Rakesh Bedi 11 August 2009

........ a nicely composed poem........

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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

yeah she was the girl and still is, the first and the last, the loveliest I ever see...the universe. Lovely words...good write, mate.

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Shilesha Johnson 25 August 2009

very unique.. i give it a 10

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

lovely and interesting poem.....10++++++++++++++

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Eyan Desir 12 August 2009

Well interesting poem....

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Dear Poet Ma’mn, Thanks for your comment on ‘Lithe Lips’. This is a nice one and a big thank you. Regards, dr. sakti. 11.08.09.

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