Shining With Smiling Face Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Shining With Smiling Face
Firmament is garden
Where stars are flowers,
Cumulus clouds are foliage
And dew is the shower.
Stars, stars so many stars
No one can count,
It is wonderful creation of creator
Who has created ocean, mount.
Stars are flowers like
Kids do want to pluck,
It seems colourful flowers
Or in the night white flock.
All kids are like twinkled stars
Shining with smiling face,
They dazzle in the human-sky
They are above the caste, creed and race.
Stars are beautiful flowers
Where firmament is garden,
Kids are attractive stars
And Nature is warden.
Thanks to Supreme God
Who is the creator of all?
Pray him, meditate him
He will save from fall.
A lovely comparison, Stars, Flowers, Kids...........10
Lovely poem on stars and children! Both have glowing faces! This deserves 10
picture of Keith Labonte xFourth stanza was my favorite. Great work! 7 Sep 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of Chris Fortune xVery excellent and meaningful write! 7 Sep 2015 by Chris Fortune | Reply picture of Eleni Cola xThis is truly captivating, Kumarmani! God truly unites us with our inner most being. Thank you for sharing your beautiful art. 7 Sep 2015 by Eleni Cola | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xSo very beautiful! Love this. 7 Sep 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xbeautiful write sir.... 7 Sep 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xBeautifully told Sir.Thank you for sharing. 7 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xnicely composed, very lovely 7 Sep 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xA magnificent write.....I love the inclusion of the stars.....and the ending is sublime! 7 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x..........beautiful poem, I love the imagery of stars shining with smiling face ★ Thanks to Supreme God Who is the creator of all? 7 Sep 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of laura loveheart xStunning imagery sir, tfs, , [3 8 Sep 2015 by laura loveheart | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is beautiful. I adore the thoughts you conjure. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece. 8 Sep 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xMagnificent ink I truly love your inks Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings my dear friend 8 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xOMG, this is most divine, celestial highest and I love the phrase Supreme God. Yes! He created all, happiest to read this. 9 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply
Nice poem, well rien too! nature are truly beautiful, sometimes we forget this, thanx for the reminder!
All the beautiful things around us are the creation of God and the innocent smile of a child is one of them... and the poem is another beautiful thing that you have created to depict God's supremacy. loved it. thank you for sharing....10+
Nature is warden; so, let us respect life and respect all mankind. Nice work.
Stars have always been attractive to men. many mythological and astrological stories are associated with them. Children are also like stars. Many innocent stories are associated with our childhood. My friend Mahakul has power to describe the beauty wherever it is......................10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A beautiful poem, Kumarmani. I felt good after reading it.