Kumarmani Mahakul

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Shining With Smiling Face - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Firmament is garden
Where stars are flowers,
Cumulus clouds are foliage
And dew is the shower.

Stars, stars so many stars
No one can count,
It is wonderful creation of creator
Who has created ocean, mount.

Stars are flowers like
Kids do want to pluck,
It seems colourful flowers
Or in the night white flock.

All kids are like twinkled stars
Shining with smiling face,
They dazzle in the human-sky
They are above the caste, creed and race.

Stars are beautiful flowers
Where firmament is garden,
Kids are attractive stars
And Nature is warden.

Thanks to Supreme God
Who is the creator of all?
Pray him, meditate him
He will save from fall.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature, spiritual


Comments about Shining With Smiling Face by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 7:40:00 PM)

    Feedback received
    picture of Keith Labonte
    xFourth stanza was my favorite. Great work!
    7 Sep 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply

    picture of Chris Fortune
    xVery excellent and meaningful write!
    7 Sep 2015 by Chris Fortune | Reply

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    xThis is truly captivating, Kumarmani! God truly unites us with our inner most being. Thank you for sharing your beautiful art.
    7 Sep 2015 by Eleni Cola | Reply

    picture of Nishu Mathur
    xSo very beautiful! Love this.
    7 Sep 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply

    picture of Rohan *******
    xbeautiful write sir....
    7 Sep 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply

    picture of Ramin Ara
    xBeautifully told Sir.Thank you for sharing.
    7 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

    picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt
    xnicely composed, very lovely
    7 Sep 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply

    picture of Jane Taylor Hardy
    xA magnificent write.....I love the inclusion of the stars.....and the ending is sublime!
    7 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

    picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡
    x..........beautiful poem, I love the imagery of stars shining with smiling face ★ Thanks to Supreme God Who is the creator of all?
    7 Sep 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply

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    xStunning imagery sir, tfs, , [3
    8 Sep 2015 by laura loveheart | Reply

    picture of Sneha SK
    xThis is beautiful. I adore the thoughts you conjure. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
    8 Sep 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply

    picture of Angel mia LOVE
    xMagnificent ink I truly love your inks Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings my dear friend
    8 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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    xOMG, this is most divine, celestial highest and I love the phrase Supreme God. Yes! He created all, happiest to read this.
    9 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply
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  • Lubinda Lubinda (9/11/2015 8:10:00 PM)


    Nice poem, well rien too! nature are truly beautiful, sometimes we forget this, thanx for the reminder! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/9/2015 12:43:00 AM)


    All the beautiful things around us are the creation of God and the innocent smile of a child is one of them... and the poem is another beautiful thing that you have created to depict God's supremacy. loved it. thank you for sharing....10+ (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/8/2015 8:49:00 AM)


    Nature is warden; so, let us respect life and respect all mankind. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/8/2015 4:42:00 AM)


    Stars have always been attractive to men. many mythological and astrological stories are associated with them. Children are also like stars. Many innocent stories are associated with our childhood. My friend Mahakul has power to describe the beauty wherever it is......................10 (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/8/2015 12:14:00 AM)


    Lovely poem on stars and children! Both have glowing faces! This deserves 10 (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/7/2015 1:29:00 PM)


    A lovely comparison,
    Stars,
    Flowers,
    Kids...........10
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  • Kelly Kurt (9/7/2015 12:12:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem, Kumarmani. I felt good after reading it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015



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