Short Stories - 58 Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Short Stories - 58

Rating: 5.0


For sale: antique phone. Wired technology.

Friday, October 7, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Short Stories Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 October 2022

Excellent observation Bravo Top 5

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Richard Wlodarski 08 October 2022

THX, LeeAnn! I wonder what Hemingway would have thought of his inspired series.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 October 2022

Dear PH. I have now 3X posted replies to all these poets. Can you please retrieve and post them. Thank you kindly!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 October 2022

Excellent Short Stories Series, Richard, like LeeAnn I say BRAVO to you too. WOW! I am amazed by your brevity.5 Stars TOP Score for you!

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Richard Wlodarski 15 October 2022

Really greatly appreciate your very positive comments, Sylvia. I too am amazed how I went from the long and winding road poems to the shortest path. Not an easy task. But well worth it!

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M.J. Lemon 12 October 2022

This verse is genius, Richard. For some reason I can't get the image of someone trying to tie a cell phone to a phone cable/vintage /landline out of mind....

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Richard Wlodarski 15 October 2022

Now, that's funny, M.J.! THX so much for believing it to be genius.

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Susan Williams 10 October 2022

Ahhh---I have tried over and over to compete with Hemingway's short story feat---suffice it to say, I felt humbled! ! ! Your short story tickled me and almost makes me want to try again...almost! ! ! five starred this and I enjoyed it

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Richard Wlodarski 15 October 2022

Susan, it's always such a great pleasure to receive commentary from you! This Short Stories Series has been very challenging. And very rewarding. I'm very happy that this poem brought a little amusement into your life.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 October 2022

THX, Dillip for adding this modern dinosaur to your favourites!

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