Shub Thee Aur Main Tanha! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Shub Thee Aur Main Tanha!

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Shub thee aur maiN tanha
Aur hawa ka ik jhonka
Teri yaad ki Khushboo
Saath leker aaya tha

Mujh ko yuun laga jaise
Tou hai mere pahloo meN
Tere tun ki Khushboo se
Dil mahak uTha tha mera

Teri garm saNson se
Jism jal gaya mera
Kya tapish thee saansoN meN
jism.o jaan pighal gaya

Such to bus yehee hai tou
Mujh se door hi kub tha
Jaan.o.dil men rahta hai
Door ho nahi sakta

Mere aansoo.oN men tou
Meree har Khushee meN tou
Tou hai mere khuwaaboN meN
dharkanon main tou rehta

Mere dil meN basta hai
Door kaise jayega
Mujh se door reh ker bhi
Door reh na payega

©Aarzoo Mehek

Shub Thee Aur Main Tanha!
Wednesday, June 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,longing,miss you,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 24 June 2016

Lajawab, bemisaal..........Beyond Mehek, Beyond Aarzoo......100++++++++++ Mere aansoo.oN men tou Meree har Khushee meN tou Tou hai mere khuwaaboN meN dharkanon main tou rehta It reminded me : Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho Dair Mein Tu Haram Mein Tu, Arsh Pe Tu Zameen Pe Tu Jiss Ki Pohonch Jahan Talak Us K Liyeah Waheen Pe Tu Markaz E Justuju, Aalam E Rung O Boo, Dum Ba Dum Jalwagar Tu He Tu Chaar Su Hu K Mahool Mein Kuch Nahi Illah Hu, Tum Bohot Dilruba Tum Bohot Khoobaru Arsh Ki Azmatein Farsh Ki Aabro, Tum Ho Qonein Ka Haasil-E-Aarzo Aankh Nay Ker Lia Aanso'on Say Wazu, Ub To Ker Do Ata Deed Ka Ik Sabu Aao Parday Say Tum Aankh K Ru Baru, Chund Lamhay Milan Do Ghari Guftagu Naaz Jabta Phiray Ja Baja Qo Ba Qu, Wahdahu Wahdahu La Shareeka Laho Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 June 2016

Tahe dil se shukar guzaar hun...aur meri adna se kalaam ne aapko kya hi khoobsurat kalaam yaad dila diya, ye mere liye bais.e khushi hai.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 June 2016

Wow! the music and rendition by Gurmeetji has made a matching tribute to your kalaam. Has 'char chand laga diya' to your ghazal. Loved listening. Would come back to listen again. Thank you Aarzoo. Your mehek is showing!

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 June 2016

Gratitude from the bottom of my heart for listening to this nazm. Will surely pass your message to Gurmeet jii.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 June 2016

A touching song of love and separation. It is more of ghazal. Arzoo, I would like you to add music and post in ph in your own voice. Pl try..

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 June 2016

I uploaded the audio clip of this nazm sung by Gurmeet jii. Thanks for appreciating this nazm.

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