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I Walk Alone...!

Rating: 4.6

I smile till it starts to look fake
I laugh till my heart aches

I crave for my unfulfilled dreams
I wake up with heart wrenching screams

I breathe till I grasp to hold on to life
I walk alone on treacherous path with strife

I hold my head high in-spite of life's deceit
I struggle to survive fate's defeat

I try to drown my sadness in the cup of time
As the time marches with it's melodious chime

I hold on to little sunshine that warms my heart
As I look forward to life with a fresh new start

I wait for the package of surprises to unfold
As life still has something called faith to hold.

© Aarzoo Mehek

I Walk Alone...!
Friday, June 17, 2016
Fate Poems: 84 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,fate,alone
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 20 June 2016

Very rightly said we all are waiting for surprises to unfold with a HOPE............10++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 June 2016

Hi Arzoo, Beautifully penned poem, excellently worded. But, more than the poetic beauty, i treasure your hope and extreme faith in Him. To hold one's head high in spite of life's deceit is extremely difficult especially when you are aloe! and extremely important! Top cede defeat is easy. To succumb to strife and pressure is common. But to survive, it demands lot of courage and will power. Your poem, I hope, will prompt many in that state to look up with hope. And the spiritual inclination you exude is marvellous. In the present day, where everybody is after material pleasures, spiritousness is rare to find. Thank you for sharing for everybody to read. Keep writing.

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B.m. Biswas 17 June 2016

Beautiful....spontaneous and smooth rhyming..... a well dragging of a thought with soothing melody.. .my favourite lines: I wait for the package of suprises to unfold As life still has something called faith to hold. +: ; # my dear poet friend....... it seems to me that possibly....fresh and new are same in meaning...in the line..as I look forward.....fresh new start....is it not tautology? .....but I may be wrong as it not our mother tongue and I am not so confident to use..and here it in poetry! ! ! ! ....... .....I enjoy it very much..a big 10.....friend# nurul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 September 2018

Wow! This is a great poem beautifully penned. Congratulations! A nice poem is selected as the poem of the day. With sweet melodious chime and sunshine life can be cherished. Cheerfulness and sweet breeze can remove anxiety. Package of surprise comes suddenly. You have brilliantly expressed this theme. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Sayeed Abubakar 17 June 2016

You are a real poet I see. Nice poem with excellent rhyming.

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Susan Williams 30 December 2020

I try to drown my sadness in the cup of time----that is top notch writing displayed there, a deep thought so simply and elegantly expressed--- top marks on this poem

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Prem Nizar Hameed 27 July 2020

Well written with unswerving optimism, Arzoo.

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Ravi Kopra 08 July 2020

main tab tak muskraati rehti hoon jab tak meri asli muskaan nakli nahin bun jaati main tab tak hansti rehti hoon jab tak meri hansi mere dil ko dard nahin deti

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Anjandev Roy 07 July 2020

Such a precious write......thank u....anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 September 2018

This is a magnificent poem on hope that articulates positive mindset for the fresh tasks... I congratulate you for this beautiful poem of yours being displayed on board as POD!

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