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The Master Mind!

Rating: 4.9

We think only We've a manipulative mind
Above us all there is super calculative mind
Who can juggle our life with his mastermind
And still gives a chance to repent and be kind

We try hiding ourselves from the reality
For sure one will lose the sanity
Our every greed will be measured
And every deed will be treasured

Life is not always a bed of roses
One has to surpass all the phases
In the journey of life what have we gained
Trampling sensitive hearts in the bargain

Just remember for every tear one has to pay
Our misdeeds counted God will have his say
One schemes for one's own selfish reasons
But God has his own agenda his own seasons

Remember God the Greatest He controls it all
Man just pretends till the day he falls.

© Aarzoo Mehek

The Master Mind!
Thursday, March 17, 2016
Greed Poems: 49 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: god
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 17 March 2016

Amazing, Outstanding and brilliant. We always pretend as if we already know, whereas we know not....You nailed the hypocrisy hidden in humans....Loved it, Loved it and Loved it...Aarzoo with double A and triple plus. +++

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2016

There is a super calculative mind! ! ! The Creator Almighty; who created everything. Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 March 2016

Verily, God is the all knower and doer Loved reading the verse.....10

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Kelly Kurt 17 March 2016

~My mind prevents me from believing in a god without any proof, but the tenets of moral and ethical thought and actions still drive my life.

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A. Madhavan 30 April 2016

Pious and consoling to a person beset by setbacks, which she or he cannot explain why they occur.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 November 2021

Excellent poem dear poetess.All lines are significant and informative.Our every greed will be measured and every deed will be treasured.Very true of the super calculative God's mind.

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Chinedu Dike 14 April 2021

Well crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour.

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 September 2020

Profound writing ‘Just remember for every tear one has to pay”.... Very true. But who remembers this?

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Dipak Adhya 25 July 2020

Life is not always a bed of roses One has to surpass all the phases...universal philosophical thought. Classic one.

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Man is a tool in the hands of God. We act as He prompts.The master mind is beyond everything man visualises...10

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