A Rose Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

A Rose

Rating: 4.7


I'm a white rose pure and innocent
Pluck me not for your momentary pleasures
Crush me not to be found after years
In the books among the shelves
Or in the jewel box of your treasure
Free me please from your whims n desires.
To the rhythmic breeze let me sway
In the warmth of love let me bask
Let me live these fleeting moments
Feeling the ecstasy of freedom

© Aarzoo Mehek

A Rose
Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: books,freedom,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 19 June 2018

I do like this soulful write of white.++10 Congratulations on your posting in this category.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 November 2016

A lovely super cool poem of freedom in metaphor and delicate to read in comparison. Thumbs up. Great to read Fromu again. I hope u will too my latest titled ashurah

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Cigeng Zhang 23 November 2016

Such a beautiful White Rose will become the floral essence with the lasting fragrance.Nicely written.

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Red Soul 19 June 2018

Roses, all flowers, humans, anything alive should be treated with the love, care, and respect they deserve. A wonderful poem ma'am. Thanks for sharing: -) And congratulations on being the poet of the day ^_^^_^

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Congratulations 19 June 2018

On being a red idiot. A yellow idiot would be more appropriate for hiding your name and posting no poems. How could anyone give you any credibility?

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 03 February 2023

A wonderful composition...loved it

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2023

5 stars. But, in your PoemHunter bio, I think you want to type PoemHunter, not Poetry Hunter. : )

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2023

I like it. Yeah, being crushed between book pages is so boring! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't pick me; just take a picture/photo. bri : )

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Nabakishore Dash 23 January 2023

Extremely heart touching poem Aarzooji.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 20 January 2023

Nice metaphor. Every life is a rose. Let it live free till its natural end. Good poem, Aarzoo

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