A Rose Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

A Rose

Rating: 4.7

I'm a white rose pure and innocent
Pluck me not for your momentary pleasures
Crush me not to be found after years
In the books among the shelves
Or in the jewel box of your treasure
Free me please from your whims n desires.
To the rhythmic breeze let me sway
In the warmth of love let me bask
Let me live these fleeting moments
Feeling the ecstasy of freedom

© Aarzoo Mehek

A Rose
Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: books,freedom,rose
Robert Murray Smith 19 June 2018

I do like this soulful write of white.++10 Congratulations on your posting in this category.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 November 2016

A lovely super cool poem of freedom in metaphor and delicate to read in comparison. Thumbs up. Great to read Fromu again. I hope u will too my latest titled ashurah

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Red Soul 19 June 2018

Roses, all flowers, humans, anything alive should be treated with the love, care, and respect they deserve. A wonderful poem ma'am. Thanks for sharing: -) And congratulations on being the poet of the day ^_^^_^

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Congratulations 19 June 2018

On being a red idiot. A yellow idiot would be more appropriate for hiding your name and posting no poems. How could anyone give you any credibility?

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This lovely poem by Aarzoo ranks number Four in the Best Poems of Member Poets. Congratulations to Aarzoo. This beautiful piece truly deserves the recognition. I am very happy that finally PoemHunter chose to recognise real talent.

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Today this poem is at 86. From #07 to #86 in a matter of days! Well done PoemHunter

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Pity! This marvellous poem is placed at rank number #86 in the Best Poems of Members! From position no 08 to 86. I feel disillusioned at the irresponsible behaviour of ph admin

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This lovely poem is ranked at #08 in the list of Best Poems of Member Poets today. A rank it truly deserves! Finally, PoemHunter has accorded it the place it deserves. Thank you, PoemHunter. And Congratulations, Poet Aarzoo.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 January 2024

I thank you for appreciating and supporting my work. Thank you for such beautiful feedback. It gives immense joys to the writers to write more and share it with our well wishers.

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Today this beautiful poem is ranked at #29 in the Best Poems of Members. It deserves to be ranked higher. But, so far so good

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