Jewel Poems: 19 / 500

A Rose

Rating: 4.7

I'm a white rose pure and innocent
Pluck me not for your momentary pleasures
Crush me not to be found after years
In the books among the shelves
Or in the jewel box of your treasure
Free me please from your whims n desires.
To the rhythmic breeze let me sway
In the warmth of love let me bask
Let me live these fleeting moments
Feeling the ecstasy of freedom

© Aarzoo Mehek

A Rose
Monday, November 14, 2016
Jewel Poems: 19 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: books,freedom,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 19 June 2018

I do like this soulful write of white.++10 Congratulations on your posting in this category.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 November 2016

A lovely super cool poem of freedom in metaphor and delicate to read in comparison. Thumbs up. Great to read Fromu again. I hope u will too my latest titled ashurah

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Cigeng Zhang 23 November 2016

Such a beautiful White Rose will become the floral essence with the lasting fragrance.Nicely written.

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Red Soul 19 June 2018

Roses, all flowers, humans, anything alive should be treated with the love, care, and respect they deserve. A wonderful poem ma'am. Thanks for sharing: -) And congratulations on being the poet of the day ^_^^_^

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Congratulations 19 June 2018

On being a red idiot. A yellow idiot would be more appropriate for hiding your name and posting no poems. How could anyone give you any credibility?

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Indira Renganathan 28 November 2021

A meaningful poem much inspiring...full score

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2021

I am delighted to find this beautiful poem in 500 member poems (#437 today) . Many congratulations! !

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Mark Heathcote 25 November 2021

Again a wonderful wirte, I enjoy you work.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2021

I profusely admire the beautiful remark of poet Nabakishore. It's a perfumed poem!

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Nabakishore Dash 24 November 2021

Excellent expression in every lines.I also don't like the flowers to be plucked for personal pleasure. Thanks.

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