Sibling Poem by Luwi Habte

Sibling

Rating: 3.9


Love poem for my sis and bro…safil


The sibling of mine which are too little
I miss them to hell I can’t live with out safil
The matter of time which apart us early
Are we going to see each other again even though lately?

Can’t we live together no more?
Can’t we test again love and adore?
The moment comes early which puts us apart
I am the one hurted more, can’t see my sibling mom and dad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 12 April 2009

Great feeling portrayed for a sibling or sonoral love...Goes resonating for fraternal love as well.Its a good application.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 14 April 2009

An enchanting treat for your siblings..I feel the same way about mine..some I can drive to, the others I must fly to. Good write.

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Eyan Desir 21 April 2009

Good write dear poet

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Joscelyn Alderdice 19 April 2009

A beautiful poem :) amazing work!

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 April 2009

Very polished and noble thoughts expressed here.A 10 for you.

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Hiding Nothing 18 April 2009

Though i do get the story line. (believe ME) i think you could have better worrded it. Though we are probly from different countries so it would sound different to me, than you. Still good... i give it a 8.5

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Sameer Ahmed 18 April 2009

Adoration to beloved sister and brother is splendid in this short poem.....10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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