Love poem for my sis and bro…safil
The sibling of mine which are too little
I miss them to hell I can’t live with out safil
The matter of time which apart us early
Are we going to see each other again even though lately?
Can’t we live together no more?
Can’t we test again love and adore?
The moment comes early which puts us apart
I am the one hurted more, can’t see my sibling mom and dad.
An enchanting treat for your siblings..I feel the same way about mine..some I can drive to, the others I must fly to. Good write.
Very polished and noble thoughts expressed here.A 10 for you.
Though i do get the story line. (believe ME) i think you could have better worrded it. Though we are probly from different countries so it would sound different to me, than you. Still good... i give it a 8.5
Adoration to beloved sister and brother is splendid in this short poem.....10/10 Best Wishes Sameer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great feeling portrayed for a sibling or sonoral love...Goes resonating for fraternal love as well.Its a good application.