First look at morning light.
Birds sing in mid flight.
Dew upon the green grass.
Silent breeze, sun light brass.
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The title is perfect for this, I too have felt this type of moment, it's like a sporadic of thoughts pummeling through my mind, places like these give people like me hope. Very nice write
While i was reading i can visualize the each line...its so soft and sweet...liked the couples in these poem...Great flow and very expressive
Thanks for bringing home the beauty of the morning, which we could well visualize reading your poem. Well penned.
Joe, there is a very relaxing tone to this poem, you can all most picture your self there.. Andrew 10
I do really love this poem! a pinch of fantasy in a silent moments bring back to life........ all the emotions... well written...thanks for share it
A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully.