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Saturday, November 8, 2008

Silent Moments

Rating: 5.0
First look at morning light.
Birds sing in mid flight.
Dew upon the green grass.
Silent breeze, sun light brass.
Golden morning with purple clouds.
Some flowers sprouted and proud.
Fallen leaf floats upon a lake.
Willow branch hung like a rake.
Stolen moment before dawn.
Silent waters with a lake fawn.
Cries come from the silent deep.
Glad I have seen a tiny peak.

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COMMENTS
Marieta Maglas 06 July 2010
A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully.
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Simone Inez Harriman 12 November 2009
Lovely poem Joe.10 from me.
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Twiggy Tubercio 08 October 2009
The title is perfect for this, I too have felt this type of moment, it's like a sporadic of thoughts pummeling through my mind, places like these give people like me hope. Very nice write
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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 September 2009
Oh how beautifully you penned the natures beauty! 10+
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Gert Strydom 12 June 2009
What a beautifull picture you painted here.
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Kranthi Pothineni 17 March 2009
While i was reading i can visualize the each line...its so soft and sweet...liked the couples in these poem...Great flow and very expressive
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Thanks for bringing home the beauty of the morning, which we could well visualize reading your poem. Well penned.
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Linda Winchell 08 November 2008
I love this one Sir Joe! Gave it a ten. Linda
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 November 2008
Joe, there is a very relaxing tone to this poem, you can all most picture your self there.. Andrew 10
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Giansalvatore Pintus 08 November 2008
I do really love this poem! a pinch of fantasy in a silent moments bring back to life........ all the emotions... well written...thanks for share it
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