Simplicity Poem by Sandra Fowler

Simplicity

Rating: 4.6


Simplicity is like a sycamore,
Quite nude and living weather to the core.
Its terseness speaks to me of skeletons
So tissue paper frail against the sun.

I count the bare bones of emotion's dance.
The glory and the pity of the circumstance,
Lifts us to the apex of poverty,
Where there is nothing but a need to be.

Though sunset is a thread upon the hill,
And dying light severely tests the will,
Just that we matter is of so much worth,
We scarcely notice that it costs the earth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 27 March 2006

sandra, i like these lines very much: count the bare bones of emotion's dance. The glory and the pity of the circumstance, yes, the world might come back against us.

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2006

You show such tallent and so much of the time.Love Duncan

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Gregory Gunn 16 January 2006

Dear Sandra, I have only read a scant few of your poems. Who says rhyming is passe. This one is quite beautiful. Gregory

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Ernestine Northover 31 December 2005

Nice write Sandra, love the last two lines of the last stanza. Very cleverly thought out, and put together. Thanks. Thanks too for your comments on my poems. Love Ernestine XXX

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Victoria Hughes 31 December 2005

sandra this is a lovely poem, very well written too V x

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premji premji 25 February 2010

dear sandraji you pull me back to the days of holocaust........ i hear the silent weeps.... broken bones................

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Maria C. Pires Costa 18 October 2009

You really are so much talented, gifted, that you quickly transform your 'Simplicity' into Grandiosity! Many God's blessings for you, dear Sandra.

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Maria C. Pires Costa 18 October 2009

You really are so much talented, gifted, that you quickly transform 'Simplicity' into grandiosity, dear Sandra! Many God's blessings for you!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Whenever I read your poem I feel very sound that is the best value of your poem. You know the technique of adding wonderful metaphors in your work with brilliantly. I love this poem and added my 10 to it.

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premji premji 10 May 2009

sandraji, as ever you exclaim me........ simplicity...just with this one word, we can solve all the irregularities and in-equalities of the world...think of Gandhiji, the embodiment of simplicity..........

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Sandra Fowler

Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
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