1. Cool snake in soul-case
Gloomy face in the jail-cell
A sleeping sin-seed
2. Dawn walking morning
Black butterfly sits on black hair
Illustrated peccadillo
3. Saffron dusk on chair
Cheerful evening’s dark chocolates
Pocketful dainty sin
4. Lust sits on the bench
Swarming night-bus on the street
Thorny love-calyx
Wow...I have been your fan.How can you think in this way? 10+ for your thought process...Brishti Mazumdar
chosen unique title..each stanza have different themes, but there is only one conclusion..the sin-seed and others..beautiful as presented..grace
A multple faceted beast, getting new interpretations, well penned, desrves a 10++
Philophical thought expressed in easy way.... beatiful write and i appricaite so much,
you know it s a special talent u got...It is been two months since i came to the site.... and you always seems to come up with special short verses....most times the format is always the same....but very innovative and enjoy them every time i read them 'Gloomy face in the jail-cell' nice rite 10+++ regards shan
Amazing imagery with plenty to ponder...Great write! Thanks, roshni.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
complex and very intense imagery that captures very insightful observation of life