Sin-Seed And Others Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Sin-Seed And Others

Rating: 4.7


1. Cool snake in soul-case
Gloomy face in the jail-cell
A sleeping sin-seed

2. Dawn walking morning
Black butterfly sits on black hair
Illustrated peccadillo

3. Saffron dusk on chair
Cheerful evening’s dark chocolates
Pocketful dainty sin

4. Lust sits on the bench
Swarming night-bus on the street
Thorny love-calyx

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 04 June 2009

complex and very intense imagery that captures very insightful observation of life

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Wow...I have been your fan.How can you think in this way? 10+ for your thought process...Brishti Mazumdar

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Lady Grace 01 June 2009

chosen unique title..each stanza have different themes, but there is only one conclusion..the sin-seed and others..beautiful as presented..grace

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Rommel Mark Marchan 01 June 2009

so deep thinker sir

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Ejaz Khan 01 June 2009

A multple faceted beast, getting new interpretations, well penned, desrves a 10++

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Philophical thought expressed in easy way.... beatiful write and i appricaite so much,

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 June 2009

you know it s a special talent u got...It is been two months since i came to the site.... and you always seems to come up with special short verses....most times the format is always the same....but very innovative and enjoy them every time i read them 'Gloomy face in the jail-cell' nice rite 10+++ regards shan

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Muhammad Ali 08 June 2009

O great work daer friend! ! lovely piece of art! 10..

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Roshni D'Souza 07 June 2009

Amazing imagery with plenty to ponder...Great write! Thanks, roshni.

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Fiona Davidson 05 June 2009

Excellent piece Ashraful....10++++

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