////Sir, 'Ovlove//// The Snow Is The Message In [[[[poemhunter]]]] Poem by ahmed khaled

////Sir, 'Ovlove//// The Snow Is The Message In [[[[poemhunter]]]]

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sir, 'ovlove
they do steal light
from pockets of mirrors
and shoot the moon
with breasts of whores

sir, 'ovlove
i've made all my pillows
from the snow of russia
and when i tried to dream
they released..
their dark song sparrow

sir, 'ovlove
i'm still a saint with no sins
but love, these poems and tomorrow

sir, 'ovlove
the light is my serene soldier
as, orange tree in christmas'
but, the snow
i need it, , sir, ,
it's the message..........
in poemhunter

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 18 September 2011

Wow, very creative, I love the concept you've introduced here. Great politics, great poetry.

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Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2011

Speechless! Strong and touching but you must be careful my dear friend since you in forbidden land right now! I also love your concept and straight forward message! 10+++ Thanks for sharing! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Ahmed Khaled 18 September 2011

dear wonderful friend romio in east as culture we use the leader as a symbol for s.t. more general, more important for humanity and we have nothing to do with his special personality, but via him as a famous person we can reach to an area that we can not reach without him, the leader whoever he is, is a factor and an element in the eastern theme for the poetry which after all may be good for all, and all should mean the humanity that we want to express, no more, no less

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Dave Walker 19 September 2011

I can only agree with the other comments. Good write.

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Areeba Sohail 03 January 2012

ummmm its fine! ...........

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Martha David 03 January 2012

Its a lovely poem khalid i love it!

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Martha David 03 January 2012

Ahmed that is a lovely poem! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Chris Haifley 03 January 2012

Very beautiful (: though there is a real message in here, I sense there is also deep symbolizm. Great write: D keep it up!

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Samantha Turner 03 January 2012

Great poetry =^.^= but u sent me the msg 2 read it twice lol..

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M.j. Henderson 03 January 2012

it was nice :) thannks 4 sharing

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