////40 Years Under The Rain//// Poem by ahmed khaled

////40 Years Under The Rain////

Rating: 4.5


40 years under the rain
and still the desert....
lives in my clothes.

40 years under the rain
and still my women....
are made of paper.

40 years under the rain
and still dostoevsky....
punishes my sins'..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Claudia Krizay 03 January 2012

I don't understand it probably because of my lacking the education but I like the way it flows and how it is organized. Thanks, Claudia

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..wow Khaled..you are a wizard with words.. ..40 years under the rain and still the desert lives in my clothes.. ..now these lines are very meaningful and deep.. ..loved your poem..10/10..

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 02 January 2012

I LOVE DOSTOEVSKY IM HAPPY THAT YOU USED HIM IN THIS POEM HMMM THIS IS VERY MEANINGFUL

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indira Mukherjee 31 December 2011

Beautiful poem ' i but what's Dostoevsky

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Esther Obeng 30 December 2011

great poem i like it but what's Dostoevsky

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Ebi Robert 09 January 2012

Quit a good harmony of the sandy life and wetland life. Great.

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Ebi Robert 09 January 2012

Quit a good combination of desert and southern life. Great.

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Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel 08 January 2012

dostoevsky? ? ? Russia is still dying but Dostoevsky is alive for ever?)) Great novels are not a real life that is much more complicated... So many implies and meanings in your shorrt lines: Bible, russian crazy souI... I only don't have an idea where paper women came from? to be continued...

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Nicky Hill 07 January 2012

short but very sweet well done :)

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Joeseph Belcher 06 January 2012

^_^ interesting, Interesting, Well done, I like.

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