////40 Years Under The Rain//// Poem by ahmed khaled

////40 Years Under The Rain////

Rating: 4.5


40 years under the rain
and still the desert....
lives in my clothes.

40 years under the rain
and still my women....
are made of paper.

40 years under the rain
and still dostoevsky....
punishes my sins'..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Darkly 29 December 2011

Wow...this is really good. Thank you for sharing.

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Eric Cockrell 29 December 2011

closer to 60 here, and it's still raining! good one!

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 29 December 2011

Deserts living in one's clothes is bearable enough. But for deserts to live in the heart is bane.

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 29 December 2011

Just let the desert live in your clothes, not in your heart.

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Lama Mandow 30 December 2011

like big like wonderful short but sharp and witty

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Ebi Robert 09 January 2012

Quit a good harmony of the sandy life and wetland life. Great.

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Ebi Robert 09 January 2012

Quit a good combination of desert and southern life. Great.

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Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel 08 January 2012

dostoevsky? ? ? Russia is still dying but Dostoevsky is alive for ever?)) Great novels are not a real life that is much more complicated... So many implies and meanings in your shorrt lines: Bible, russian crazy souI... I only don't have an idea where paper women came from? to be continued...

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Nicky Hill 07 January 2012

short but very sweet well done :)

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Joeseph Belcher 06 January 2012

^_^ interesting, Interesting, Well done, I like.

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