////40 Years Under The Rain//// Poem by ahmed khaled

I don't understand it probably because of my lacking the education but I like the way it flows and how it is organized. Thanks, Claudia

..wow Khaled..you are a wizard with words.. ..40 years under the rain and still the desert lives in my clothes.. ..now these lines are very meaningful and deep.. ..loved your poem..10/10..

I LOVE DOSTOEVSKY IM HAPPY THAT YOU USED HIM IN THIS POEM HMMM THIS IS VERY MEANINGFUL

Beautiful poem ' i but what's Dostoevsky

great poem i like it but what's Dostoevsky

Quit a good harmony of the sandy life and wetland life. Great.

Quit a good combination of desert and southern life. Great.

dostoevsky? ? ? Russia is still dying but Dostoevsky is alive for ever?)) Great novels are not a real life that is much more complicated... So many implies and meanings in your shorrt lines: Bible, russian crazy souI... I only don't have an idea where paper women came from? to be continued...

short but very sweet well done :)

^_^ interesting, Interesting, Well done, I like.