You frighten me,
scare me,
sitting on the
ring of Saturn.
But, the silver-light
the moon borrows
from the sun,
makes your face
bright and mild.
I sit on my knees
to grasp the beauty
of the blue
and the magic
light together.
True love
drenches my
spirit freely.
..the silver light that the moon borrows from the sun...I love your choice of words, Great poem.
Some times it may be fine to see someone sitting on the ring of Saturn even if not welcome otherwise.Nice thought provoking poem. Thank you.
Simply and exquisitely cosmic! I love it's flow and message! ! ! Get busy and pen more! ! Big Fan here!
shahzia, thanks dear.Yes, You the word sometimes gives us delight, sometimes pain.Yet to get the proper place in our heart......Love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this one looks like a part of the other poem YOU, as it has the same apostrophizing touch!