Slay You Demon.. Poem by Sahra Hussein
Slay You Demon..
Having a dark life with an empty room,
Hopeless chases you were ever you are.
And kills you with a pain, full of worrisome and sadness
thinking too much to your self inside the darkness.
And every one can read your disappointed from your face
Until you found a light far way from the darkness
Which encourages your heart
And noticed from your face.
Your heart beats fast
When you take one step close to the light
Then and all you say is
Hey you cant hold me down any more
I got the top of mountain
I got hammer to beak the wall
I let my self to believe my dreams
Rather then your fears.
I will not put my heard down any more
You can't stop me!
If shout or punish me.
Your shouting I got from a lot of angry
Which made my heart stronger.
As well from your punishment I got creativity
which made me diligent.
Your words of careless
Made me laugh
you can't get me any more
Your plan for breaking me up
Showed me my weakness
Which makes me to work on it.
When I see your heartrending
It shows me that I can beat you.
When you get angry,
that shows me that I won
Well done, Sahra. Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!
What an inspiring poem that illustrates the strength, diligence, and resilience of the speaker! The poem evolves from beginning to end. It is an anthem of sorts that shows the reader that even in a difficult life, where there may be oppressors, within the self, within the family, within the community, or within our world, an individual can stand up and say, NO MORE! You write: I got the top of mountain I got hammer to beak the wall I let my self to believe my dreams Rather then your fears. I will not put my heard down any more You can't stop me! Nicely written poem Sahra. Keep writing...
SPIRAL of energy: Your plan for breaking me up Showed me my weakness Which makes me to work on it. When I see your heartrending It shows me that I can beat you. When you get angry, that shows me that I won
From your punishment I got creativity. A lovely poem showing goodness does defeat evil in our everyday lives. Well done Sahra. Worth my vote.
Verily, a lovely description of the negative and positive forces that dominate the humans. Loved reading it.........10
There is always a demon in us hiding and influencing us to do bad things. thank you for this poem. dev
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Congrats. The poem talks about countering the negativity in life to one's advantage. Amazing one. Thanks for sharing, Sahra. I would like to quote a few lines from the poem: Your shouting I got from a lot of angry Which made my heart stronger. As well from your punishment I got creativity which made me diligent.