Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,772 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Slip..... - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Slip into my fantasy
Walk into my dream
Clasp my hand in paradise
‘Neath a soft sunbeam

Touch me as a summer breeze
Gentle on my face
Keep me close against your heart
Warm in your embrace

Slide into my memory
So I’ll ne’er forget
Linger there within my mind
That I shall not fret

Step into my glist’ning eyes
Greet me with your smile
Feel my gaze upon your face
Tarry there awhile

Hold onto my shadow cast
Never set me free
Wrap me in your tender love
Through eternity

Journey deep into my soul
Find the love that’s there
Joined together, two as one
All our life to share

Comments about Slip..... by Valerie Dohren

  • Aria Siren (5/28/2013 1:06:00 PM)

    From what I gather, your style is soft like opaque sunbeams and always carried in a tone of dignity. Beautiful (Report) Reply

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  • John Brown (4/22/2013 7:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful Val, as always. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (4/16/2013 5:40:00 PM)

    Soothing, mellow and full of wonderful enchantment!
    Beautiful write!
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  • David Wood (4/16/2013 4:49:00 AM)

    Another beautiful poem Valerie and a joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2013 2:48:00 AM)

    The tender love and the manner you have portrayed it with lovely rhyming scheme is greatly alluring, Valerie! KUDOS! (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu (4/15/2013 5:00:00 AM)

    a love and feeling i hope to share with someone special one day, a beautiful poem as always (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/14/2013 9:31:00 PM)

    So tender is love, so smooth are your diction. Like feathers they touch my soul! (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2013 4:51:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful poem Valerie. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/13/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    You are the summer breeze that warm our smiles, a lovely write again for sure! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (4/13/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    As beautiful as a wave cresting on the ocean....
    wave after wave.....
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  • Om Chawla (4/13/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    A very lovely poem, fantasizing passionate yearning.
    I find it difficult to single out any particular stanza for praise as whole poem is, as it were, carved out of a single stone much like lovely figures of Ajanta Caves.
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  • (4/12/2013 2:53:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, the first stanza sets it up beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (4/12/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    What beautiful words. I particularly like verse 5, words that so many need. Great job Val. Kevin's message made me laugh. (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2013 1:53:00 PM)

    Wow Val if I wore glasses they'd be steamed up.
    You must be reading Jackie Collins again!
    Nice one.
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  • David Wood (4/11/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    Your poems are silky smoot. You really are a great poet (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (4/11/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    Gorgeous Val and very skilfully done. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (4/11/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Very warm and passionate! ! Two souls conjoined as one all through eternity! Wonderful! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/11/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    journey deep in to my soul. good one. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 8, 2013

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