Small Gifts: Contributing To Other's Happiness! .... [**; Nov. Challenge Poem Entry; Good Deeds; Kindness; Medium] Poem by Bri Edwards

Small Gifts: Contributing To Other's Happiness! .... [**; Nov. Challenge Poem Entry; Good Deeds; Kindness; Medium]

Rating: 5.0


You've caught me in a bitchy mood;
I'll try, as I type, to not be …. too rude.
Perhaps you'll consider that a gift.
I don't wish to cause a poet-to-poet rift.

Maybe I should just not now try
to write a pleasant poem for the BJ guy,
and the rest of you who are eager to hear
what I've got to say once I get in gear.

Have you ever said ‘don't speak if it ain't nice',
[or something like that when your mood was ice]?
But I've started and now this Bri can't quit.
I hope this poem don't sound like a pile of s++t.

‘cause that's what my mood was when I arose,
after opening my eyes and wiggling my toes,
to see if, again, I could face yet another day
of chores and trying to do as my wife does say.

I'll try real hard now to get in the swing
of just typing and seeing what time will bring.
Ah, yes. Small gifts and happiness can be nice.
I too have given small gifts, I think once or twice
in my lifetime to someone I thought was in need,
and some happiness I think they brought indeed.

A dollar or two here, a granola bar or banana there.
A smile and perhaps a few pleasant words I've said.
I'm a sucker for beggars, at which most just stare;
I may not shake their hands, but them I do not dread.

Now, before I return to my day which is somewhat dreary,
I'll mention a small gift I received which made me cheery.

One evening while sorting mail or something such,
a male coworker gave me a gift which, my heart, did touch.
It was only a paper cup of fresh water to me he offered,
but besides water, it was kindness to me he proffered.

It was a small gift, most small indeed,
and, like many gifts, it I did not need.
Perhaps, having been a prisoner of war,
he'd been the receiver of such a gift before?
And perhaps he felt sorry for me as I sat....
sorting mail to this address or to that.

(November 10, 2014)

Monday, November 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: giving
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i've said it all, above. most of it is true. some of it is exaggerated (just a bit) . the guy who gave me the water, on his way back from a break i believe, said he'd been shot down and captured in vietnam (1970s) : he had been a machine gunner on a u.s. helicopter. he said he was wounded in the knee and held captive for several months i believe. he was reported dead and his parents had a funeral for him. [fortunately he was unable to attend]. bri :)
oh yeah. this is my entry in the Nov.2014 Challenge poem writing contest which Brian Johnston runs on his PH page. questions? ask away. he gives us a title and we poets run with it. no cost or obligation, except some time and effort.

[i don't think the contest poems for the Nov. contest get posted for viewing, commenting, and voting until Brian puts them on his site Dec.1. [they may be posted on the poem authors' pages, like mine is.] now, on his site, you can view the entries in the Oct. contest, for which voting ends Oct.12th, and the 'winner' is announced by Brian on Oct.13th. is that right? it's all so confusing! ! ! ! :) ]

**my computer seems to be telling me that 'Other's' should be 'Others'. i think i wondered about that. what do you guys and gals think? of course it was Brian who stipulated 'Other's'; blame him! :) bri

'beggars'? why isn't it spelled 'beggers'? another word the computer caught me on!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valentin Savin 16 May 2019

What a good piece of poetry. I like it. Especially when you say that you are trying to do as your wife says. I favor it. Your poems sound well. Your gifts are help to others in need. Be friend or fiend. My gifts are a smile and some pleasant words I try to tell you. You have been and still are a good post man and a poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2018

“Small Gifts: Contributing To Other's Happiness! ” is a pragmatic write! I would love to quote the first stanza: You've caught me in a bitchy mood/ I'll try, as I type, to not be …. too rude/Perhaps you'll consider that a gift/I don't wish to cause a poet-to-poet rift”. Loved reading this poem!

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Loke Kok Yee 17 January 2018

Don't care too much what the computer says But your touching poem did make my day A glass of water given to one in need Will long be remembered as a good deed Thanks Bri.

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