Manonton Dalan

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Smart >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

raven up a tree watching
looking for chance, swoop
pick a food from a child
return to treetops, quick
a loud crow sears silence
victory cry; human creed
was it for raven; a joy

am trying to understand
their mysterious ritual
those sharp and keen eyes
claws that grab and fly
eons they survive this far
i know where they are

Topic(s) of this poem: raven, wildlife


Comments about Smart >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/9/2016 11:00:00 PM)


    Trying to understand mysterious rituals is very interesting definitely with this marvelous work. Fantastic sharing done here.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2016



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